I like the way this one was written! (Not that I didn't like the others) But I especially like this one! :)

I could emphasize with this one most *tear*

Dang, you had me crying through most of the stories. My favorite was the 6th.
It's so sad to read about rejections but it fits my mood completely at the moment. I kinda just wanna sleep and forget right now. But tomorrow is gonna be an awful day all over again. Sorry, I'm rambling..
Thanks for the aweseome one-shots!!

just found this 'story' read em all. so sad but so good. great job!

This is too sweet. :(

I can't explain how much I can relate to this,
textbook breakup, I suppose.

O wow

I just read all 9 of these stories and they are all so good!
I especially like the first, second and ninth ones.

I hope you write more soon ^^

I feel like I'm going to cry after all of those. Congratulations though, I assume that's exactly what you were aiming for?
x
bella.

Oh. My. God. Sob! Ground-breakingly heart-shattering. But that's exactly the way I felt. I wondered how long he'd been lying to me and why he'd just let me think everything was ok. It's ok now. He's an asshole. But I still loved him. You seem to get it. Good for you... Ya no school tomorrow.
xx
bella.

i can really relate to this chapter and its nice to know that im not weird for having felt that way.

I really like this story. This chapter was interesting, as on tv and stuff it usually seems to be the guy who gets bored/tired/sick of the relationship afterwards, not the girl.

youshould do a follow up on this story, if not a story, then a few chaters. she deserves to have her story told, the long version.

it's really amazing to see this series of one-shot develop in depth as you develop as a writer. i've read the first couple of chapters when you first updated them, and i thought they were all right. i liked your chapter length stories a lot. you're a very good writer. but, until i read this, you didn't strike me as a particularly *DEEP* and *INTELLECTUAL* writer, more like you were writing for fun and why not, cos you were good at it! brought a little more joy to the world, and that made everyone around you happy. but this, and i think most of your other one shots, are more angsty (hm, i don't remember if this is true...). but this one takes the cake. it deals with something that's so serious and that a lot of people deal with today. you write it so well, and i know a lot of people can relate to it, and the part where she thinks about the underwear she's sliping into as a virgin was particularly gripping. it's got a mood that's hanging over me from the first couple words. it's amazing. i'd high five you, but this story is way too somber for that :p lol. well, looking forward to more writing of yours! good luck with school as well. :D

I don't know what to say..
It seems so realistic.
It was wonderfully written, but in a way it's heart-wrenching.
I feel so awful for her..and I feel bad for him.
All I can say, is that you are an amazing writer.

A characteristic of a really good writer is the ability to draw you in, to cause you to want to know as much as you possibly can.

I want to know why she dumped him.
I want to know more about how it hurt him, why she hurt him, if he ever recovers.

God, you're an amazing writer.
You really do inspire me. x