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a.little.bit.closer 2007-12-03 ch 7,	abuseI love it. The descriptions are wonderful, and you can really relate to whats happening because of all the emotion you include in your writing. I've read these chapters so many times... :)
genEve 2007-11-20 ch 7,	abuseNice series here =) I like the idea behind "Rejection", as well as the one-shots you write to express this idea, in particular, the 7th story as it deviates slightly from the norm that you write, and tells things from a different point of view. So yup, it's perfectly fine =) But i think you should deviate more! Explore more types of rejection and relationships- a married couple? a teacher-student relationship? Perhaps from the boy's POV? I know you've limited this to romantic rejections, but how about a child and his pet? Mother-child relationship? Just some suggestions XP Great job so far, keep it up! Wow long review =P
katie valentine 2007-09-01 ch 6,	abuseoh my god. this sounds awfully familiar to this girl i sort of know. we're not really friends, and talk to each other. hell, we don't talk, what am i kidding?! but i know for a fact that one of her ex passed away. this chapter sounds an awful lot like her web log entries some time ago. gosh, this is so hearthbreaking. but so well-written. :]
xbluxmoonx 2007-07-28 ch 2,	abuse:-( that's so sad. i love your writing though. you really caught it all. nice job.
mia5081 2007-06-30 ch 6,	abusequestion: do you mean for your readers to almost cry when they read these? lol. i loved them, despite that fact =) update soon! ~Mia
Make Love Not War 2007-06-28 ch 7,	abuseTotally excellent. :D You could definitley feel all of her emotions. And his emotions. And stuff. Poor people. :( D:
Essevera 2007-06-24 ch 7,	abusewow...nice onshot :)
wandless 2007-06-22 ch 7,	abuseIt's great you're practicing your writing and trying different things! I'm looking forward to your next update.
Venus Smurf1 2007-06-21 ch 7,	abuseVery sad, but very well done.
lapixlili 2007-06-10 ch 6,	abusehey sarah! i love this one. actually, i think it might be my favorite thing that u've written. it has an amazing point, and has layers of meaning, whether u meant it that way or not. it reminds me of the music video for "what hurts the most," too. well anyways, that's the end of my review, cuz it's 1 in the morn. Night! or rather, Good Morning! tehe,
wandless 2007-06-10 ch 5,	abuseWow. Out of all of them I feel I can relate to this one the most. Not the plot, but just certain aspects of the characters' relationship. All six of your mini stories are quite well done. Have you considered expanding some of them into full stories? I think this one, for example, would make an excellent story, if if had a happy ending ... Keep writing! You're very talented.
Hopeless Romance 2007-04-09 ch 6,	abuseI never knew that a collection of one-shots could be this amazing. Truly, you did an exquisite job. Though I've never been in love before and have never been broken up with before, I could feel the pain of the characters in each scenario. It was so REAL. Oh, especially the last one. That one was beautiful in a sad sort of way. :) Really, these are just great. I'm going to be reading them over and over again. :D --Morgan
Carrie 2007-04-08 ch 6, anon.	abuseThis is so sad it almost made me cry. I love the ending. Keep going!
ThatOneKidWhoDoesn'tLikeSal... 2007-04-05 ch 6,	abuseaw thats so sad. but it makes me wonder, if she loved him as much as she said she did, wouldn't she have noticed someting was wrong. because i definatly got the impression he commintted suiced with the whole "he left me" thing going on. but maybe im wrong and shes just sad he died. but no, then kelly wouldn't have given her permissio to be mad at him, or suggested being mad at him at all.
xPink Blossomsx 2007-04-04 ch 6,	abuseThat was so sweet yet so sad. Bittersweet, but I loved it. =]

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