It's great you're practicing your writing and trying different things! I'm looking forward to your next update.

Very sad, but very well done.

hey sarah!

i love this one.

actually, i think it might be my favorite thing that u've written.

it has an amazing point, and has layers of meaning, whether u meant it that way or not. it reminds me of the music video for "what hurts the most," too. well anyways, that's the end of my review, cuz it's 1 in the morn.

Night!

or rather,

Good Morning!

tehe,

Wow. Out of all of them I feel I can relate to this one the most. Not the plot, but just certain aspects of the characters' relationship. All six of your mini stories are quite well done. Have you considered expanding some of them into full stories? I think this one, for example, would make an excellent story, if if had a happy ending ...

Keep writing! You're very talented.

I never knew that a collection of one-shots could be this amazing.

Truly, you did an exquisite job. Though I've never been in love before and have never been broken up with before, I could feel the pain of the characters in each scenario. It was so REAL. Oh, especially the last one. That one was beautiful in a sad sort of way. :)

Really, these are just great. I'm going to be reading them over and over again. :D

-Morgan

This is so sad it almost made me cry. I love the ending. Keep going!

aw thats so sad.

but it makes me wonder, if she loved him as much as she said she did, wouldn't she have noticed someting was wrong. because i definatly got the impression he commintted suiced with the whole "he left me" thing going on. but maybe im wrong and shes just sad he died. but no, then kelly wouldn't have given her permissio to be mad at him, or suggested being mad at him at all.

That was so sweet yet so sad. Bittersweet, but I loved it. ]

YUSS! I was right. He's dead.

That sounds really mean. :( But anyhoodles, best one yet! I always say that, but whatever. That just means you're improving. :D Yay. Okay. So. It almost made me cry. And I don't cry easily. Except for my algebra teacher, who also almost made me cry today.

But seriously. This was AwEsOmE. Which took, like, twelve minutes to type. But it was worth it.

Loves,

Sally Can Wait

This was a really good update. It was pretty sad, too. Keep up the good work, this is really great.

Amazing writing.

I love the detail of the descriptions.

This is really touching and beautifully written.

I don't know how to convey how much I associated with this.

Keep writing!

aw this one is so sad ;_; but i liked it

that is so beautiful. (Catharsis). it is vividly sad and moving. i honestly think this is your best. so so honest.

OMG

I really liked this one. I could like... relate to it. It's kind of a long story, but the guy reminds me of this kid I had this huge humongo vast uncontrollable crush on. And haven't had a crush on anyone else since. -.-

I loved it. And I love you. :D

-Sally Can Wait

P.S. You should write one where someone falls in love with someone who is homosexual. Seriously. Have you ever read "Hard Love"? I think you would like it (it was AMAZ-ZA-ZING). Which indeed is a reference to Benchwarmers.