Interesting poem.

Thanks for your review of my story "Persuading the Nonbeliever".

Good luck with writing, this story, and life.

Have a wonderful day.

~Twilight Starr~

"and knees socks that you liked to peel off so you could touch my ankles to your sheets"
"your mouth open like a gun filled with blank ammunition."

I can't even think of anything to say. You said it all too well.

It's been so long since I've read one of your poems, but every time I do I think I fall in love with your writing a bit more. As always your writing has the kind of allure that not many people can pull off. The way you structure your poems fascinates me. The language you use is so rich and evocative, it's simply beautiful, I can almost watch the words as if they were a film. "aeroplane that carried me through the street
to a place I never knew but where I met you one time" I can see the metaphor as if it's happening in front of me.

You are a truly stunning writer.