Interesting essay. I studied Latin in middle school and I really want to study it again. Unfortunatly my new school doesn't offer it and I'm not old enough to go to the community college. Anyway, I enjoyed your essay and thought it was well-written.

In almost all society's, especially in early civilizations like that of Ancient Egypt, women have lower status than men, and slaves have even lower status than women. Even in the modern era, women are considered unequal to men. Anyhow, this essay drives to point the status of women and slaves in Ancient Rome. Nicely done.

One small grammar issue in sentence: Even the Emperor Augustus showed mercy towards one slave of Vedius Pollio, who, having made a minor mistake of dropping a glass, was going to cruelly executed by being fed to eels in the master’s pond.