|Reviews for Turned Away|
| Atheneon 11/11/06 . chapter 1
Very powerful. juxtaposed meter but that doesn't matter, it still fits. Very powerful!
| Meihan 11/8/06 . chapter 1
short,sweet, and sad at the same time ) very much )
| Basara 11/7/06 . chapter 1
| KingdomRain 11/6/06 . chapter 1
short and sweet. nice
| CrazyTurtles 11/6/06 . chapter 1
Short but powerful. Good job.
| Ashelin 11/5/06 . chapter 1
Sad, angsty. :( I guess that is kind of life though. But, then again, there is so much more. Gosh, I love it. I mean, sometimes it seems so hard, and like everything in the world is evil. But oh, man, there is so much beauty and wonder. It fills me with joy. Great poem, and God bless! I hope all is well!
| Stormie Greye 11/5/06 . chapter 1
Very nice! I liked the question you started with. They wouldn't realize, or else they would not have done it. They're probably too comsumed into their own mind to know, or sadly enough, even care. It's a big slap in the face with reality. Keep it up. :)
| Cheshire XIII 11/5/06 . chapter 1
Wonderful Haiku, it seemed so sad though.