Very powerful. juxtaposed meter but that doesn't matter, it still fits. Very powerful!

short,sweet, and sad at the same time ) very much )

ouch...

nice...

short and sweet. nice

Short but powerful. Good job.

Sad, angsty. :( I guess that is kind of life though. But, then again, there is so much more. Gosh, I love it. I mean, sometimes it seems so hard, and like everything in the world is evil. But oh, man, there is so much beauty and wonder. It fills me with joy. Great poem, and God bless! I hope all is well!

-Ashelin

Very nice! I liked the question you started with. They wouldn't realize, or else they would not have done it. They're probably too comsumed into their own mind to know, or sadly enough, even care. It's a big slap in the face with reality. Keep it up. :)

Wonderful Haiku, it seemed so sad though.