 S. Ben Beach 2006-11-15 . chapter 1Call It Karma- I LOVE that song so much. So it's good to see that someone's inspired by that song.. It fits pretty well with the song. I really like the first 4 lines and from the 8th line to 15th. It's a bit too slow and drags on the story at parts, but still it's awesome. Keep writing! =) |