|Reviews for listen|
| Arafax 11/25/06 . chapter 1
Very, very nice. Your use of words is something like I've rarely seen on here, though I have not been here overly long. You are great at keeping attention.
| MyNameIsMad 11/5/06 . chapter 1
Nice, very nice. You make wonderful use of alliteration, constanly using words that start with the letter 'r'. It adds a feeling of agression and incense to the piece, which only the letter 'r' can do! Nice use of r! Nice use of text placement as well, it adds a layer of emotion and disconectivity (word?). But you get what I'm saying, I hope. I could see this being a song, if that wasn't your original plan, that is. Keep up the good work!