 Golddefender 2006-11-28 . chapter 1Well, I guess that leaving a review is pointless because it found you, but at least it wasn't me! I haven't made a sou- |
 ebony 2006-11-10 . chapter 1 I must say this was...interesting, to say the least. Not quite sure what to think, but leaving it vague was a nice touch, lets the imagination take over. |
 The Empress 2006-11-06 . chapter 1 Creepy...but cool, like everything else you write! I like the way you keep it vague, leaving our imaginations to work upon us. After all, 'the insides of our own minds are the worst nightmare.' For some reason I felt the urge to laugh throughout the entire thing. Maybe it's just my inner maniacal muse. Keep writing! |
 Guardrail 2006-11-05 . chapter 1This piece is so full of life. The feeling of paranoia from the beginning of the poem through to the end is stunningly well written. Amazing work, keep it up. |
 HyperlyEmo 2006-11-05 . chapter 1i luv it
u hav a great imagination, but just to be safe, i'll think i'll hide in the bed for now =P
...*tap tap*...
who's there?
...must be just the wi-
...i'm comin for u |
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