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Pokey the Great 2008-07-10 ch 14,	abuseWow. I found this through EmpressFunk on deviantART and I'm so glad I did! Saving Nicholas is amazing!
someone or other 2007-12-20 ch 14, anon.	abusePLEASE update. That is one really good story you have there.
Liss 2007-12-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseyou probably already noticed this yourself, but there is a slight inconsistency in the text with what Max is tied to the chair with: first it's shackles, then rope, then handcuffs...
gibbs 2007-11-30 ch 7,	abuseI know what it is! It's the Helsinki Cathedral, but it used to be called St Nicholas' Church!! I went there about 2 years ago, so I get really excited when someone writes about a place I can relate to! Great work, I'm loving the story!
Parilis 2007-11-19 ch 14,	abuseIt totally made my day, seeing that you had updated. Wish you luck in working on Writer's Circle!:) ~Parilis (God chapter)
FrenzyFan78 2007-11-18 ch 14,	abuseSo I was definitely super excited to see an update from you, since there haven't been any in a while. In fact, I put off finishing typing an essay that I need to complete in the next half a hour to read this. Ek. So I know this is a crappy review, but... oh well. I still love your story! =D -FrenzyFan78
pulpy 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseI like the flow of the narrative, you manage to balance out the actions whilst filling us with the information for we need for the moment,(huzzah for no info-dumping,)it reminds of Rowling, cause you get the feeling that if the world you're uncovering wasn't so interesting, you may be bored. I like your language too, it's full-throttle with the senses, you know you've used the kind of words that stick in your mind. Very professional and mature. '“G-Grisha?” he stammered,' We know by the hesitation that he's stammering, although I suppose you need a tagline is necessary to show who's speaking. Yeah leave that. 'A cruel laugh made every hair on Max’s neck stand on end.' Hmm. How can a laugh be cruel, I think showing Max's reaction alone will make his laugh seem more cruel. Don't tell us it's cruel. I can tell you've edited sparsely. All of the adverbs and tag-lines justify their right to be there. In addition I like your use of body-language. 'Grigory Iakovich Rezanov resembled a starved mosquito at his best moments' that line kicks **! :D Great story, keep writing my friend. BTW: It's Ethereal from SE.
Parilis 2007-06-17 ch 13,	abuseAh, I btw left a review for chapter 12, but... uh well, hope this one will make it:) I have to say that they're plan was a way too rough. They would have succeeded if they only had thought everything through. My heart was pounding while I read this. While reading this I didn't hear or think of anything else than reading this story. cahpter14...chapter14...
Musukono 2007-06-16 ch 13,	abuseFantastic story! You are very talented at weaving suspense and creating interesting characters. I can't wait to read more. :)
Michelle Habibi 2007-06-15 ch 13,	abuseomg, what a twist, cori is being used as blackmail to make nick do what rezanov wants...its so exciting!! i cant wait to read more! -Michelle
asddfgh 2007-06-15 ch 13, anon.	abuseI absolutely loved it. You have to keep posting. Bites nails Pretty please??
FrenzyFan78 2007-06-12 ch 13,	abuseWow, this chapter had me wide awake the whole time! (Which is saying something, since it's 1:30 am and I'm still recovering from jet lag.) In other words, an incredible chapter. You'll definitely have to let me know when you move to the other website, cause I'll have to keep up with this story there; you have me hooked. Eesh, please post another chapter soon, because I would love to know what happens! -FrenzyFan78
A Reader Peep 2007-06-12 ch 13, anon.	abuseI have to admit, I about had a heart attack when I read you were pulling the story. Then I almost had another heart attack when I read about the site (but this was a good thing. That I was surprised, I mean). I was going batty trying to figure out where Monica had gone, because it seemed so random. I almost started bawling when the stories got pulled. Anywho...I can hardly wait until the site goes up. Teeheehee. Now. I should probably actually READ the chapter...hehe.
Annatari 2007-06-12 ch 13,	abuseOMG OMG OMG! Katya got rescued! Yay! Cori and Nick kissed (even if they didn't mean it)! Yay! Nick gave in to Rezanov...not so yay. I can't wait to find out what happens next! And the website thing sounds awesome. :D Incredible chapter!
Vivacioussky 2007-06-12 ch 13, anon.	abuseWow!! That was one exciting, brilliant chapter!! I really cant wait to see how the next chapter turns out. Rezanov is really gettingon my nerves. Now that Katya is safe, I do wonder how Cori and Nick are going to get themselves out of this mess. Poor Nick... he really is getting tortured a lot ^^;; Good luck with the new site. I'll miss this story on Fictionpress, but a new home for Saving Nicholas and the Firebird series seems really really nice! I will defo be looking forward to seeing them again in August. Good luck!! :D

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