I love this, even the title becasue it's just so flippant.

I'd really like to hear the conversation that got them to this point as well.

Enjoyed the way you wrote about the cliche of blood on the snow, and made it very vivid. The coyness of the girl holding the gun, and her flushed cheeks was good as well. It made it seem like a proper date.

Yes, brilliant and weird and loving the way your mind works. Too gushy? Sorry.

Gawd amighty, I can't say ahv ever seen such a tale in all my days. Whut crazy idea put that thing in yor head?
Ah must say it is an ahdea many have had, but few have had any conscious thought they might want to writ about it. And here you go, havin dun it.
Congratulations, Ghaust in the Durk. Yu've made me fel like laffing..and like barfin my guts out. Atypical re-ac-shuns when combined, to be shour.
Awn the description side, I have to say despite the subject matter--or perhaps because of it--everything is crystal clear. You have a thing for descriptions, that's fer shour.
Uh...unfawrtunately, I don't have much more to say. This was not a productive review.
By the way, I like the story.
K. Stramin

Dude that's crazy,funny,weird,creepy, and awesome!! i think it is more of a weirdly creepy thing but then again it is so totally awesome!! no no actually it is not awesome.. im sorry. BECAUSE IT IS AWESOMO!! (which is better and awesome)

Sincerely,
Fallen

P.S.:Awesomo is a word and MY WORD and u cannot use it because I, Fallen Angel818, here by claims and declares it!

Short and sweet. Well written to bring this bizzare idea come to life.

Wow...that was creepy-but-cool. I like the who-wudda-thunk-it part, haha...yes, I know that I'm reviewing a lot of your stuff and just completely and utterly suckingup to you...xD it's good! Thanks for your review, too.

~Frodo

This one makes me smile.