Random and funny, yet still disturbingly creepy. I loved the line, ‘No really, I can and it’s creepy.’

I also like the way that we only heard her side of the conversation (sexist? But in chocolate related crimes girl makes sense, right?).

I really enjoyed your attention to detail. The crappy soap being pink, and the fact that she likes coffee. It fleshed out the atmosphere and your character although this was a really short piece.

Very true, Very true. I'm partial to Hershey's myself

Awesome, I liked it alot!

hahaha
very random
and funny


a bit weird though

good job:)

Really, Really funny, I enjoyed it a lot!

Humorish. Well done.