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| MakeSomethingUp 2008-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting. I am now curious where this is going. Want to read the next chapter. Thanks. I've written a book, "Identities" and I've posted the first chapter under supernatural. If you would please reivew it, I would highly appreciate it. Thanks again. MakeSomethingUp |
| RedHatter 2007-10-02 ch 1, | abuseLol. This going to be good story! I can just tell! Keep it up! |
| ebonydragon 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat story...Very smooth...love the creativity of it, and it is a great original story! You could have maybe added a little bit more of his life with Cassandra, but overall, very good job! |
| Cirien Phoenix 2006-12-18 ch 1, | abuseWait... you're saying the girl he loved from Tennesee happened to be living inthe apartment directly where he moved in? He also didn't REALLY test the devil and say I want Cassandra here with me? I think you could have made more of this story. Parts of it seemed a little weak. I think you could improve on this. Not bad though. Great idea! ~Cirien Phoenix |
| commit-this-to-memory 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseI'm from tennessee... ha. yeah. i guess we are losers that know nothing about well... people. but thats okay. I'm getting out of here as fast as I can this is really original, and cool. But I'm confused. If he didn't know where cassandra was, then he asked the devil, and found out but it was just a dream then how did he know where to find her? peace me |