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| Black Alya Wolf 2007-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseKudos on the excellent description of Halloween. It's written well, with a decent rhyming scheme. I think line one of stanza three should be shortened by a color or two, but other than that, good job! Alya |
| Diana 2006-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery Nice Megan. It is a very good way to manage anger! Have fun with your air rifle, and I beat you can't wait 'till You get your air gun. :) Peace. ^5 Diana |