wow, that's pretty sad... very well written!

Intriguing and rather fast-paced. Interesting. Far from the thoughts I've had about this song. I like the song though, and I like this story. It seems he's trying so hard to torture her, make her regret what she's done more than she already seems to.

Aw it's sad. Relationships are really fragile...

This is realyl good. I love the incorporation of the song. It's really great. Bravo!

Interesting that you chose to write about a popular song. I like it.