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| CELESTIAL*VISIONARY 2007-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice work, but what do you mean he don't love you anymore! Constance P.S. Sorry I haven't been on here in forever. |
| Devin Brines 2006-11-23 ch 1,  | abuseIt is good, but it just comes off as sort of cheesy to me. Probably because I'm a heartless ** who has never been in love, but you know. :P I think it would be better if you really explained your feelings well, rather than cliches. It just seems like I could have written it without experiencing it. Clever rhyming at the end. |
| LoopyGirdlejuice 2006-11-06 ch 1, | abuseI love it. I have also just come out of my first ever relationship that consisted of love. *deep breath* This hits home. |