I didn't think this had anything to do with sex and the ones who thins so, is just plain dumb *smirking*
Nono, it was oh, so good.
Now, This was my kind of story. I like these kinds alot. And you put the words together so beautifully.
What more is there to say besides that I love it?

This is beautiful!! You're so much better at writing poems! This one is one of my most favorites of yours :D

thaat really good. you are god at writting poems i have tryed byt failed as they don't make any sense.