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| Matthew Hux 2006-11-06 ch 1,  | abusehaha! I like it, it sounds like an alternative to the witches chant in MacBeth very catchy! |
| hellbentheretic 2006-11-06 ch 1, | abuseI love the sing song way you can produce these things. I love it when rhyming truely works in a poem. I'm more eclectic now with my stuff than I was in the past, but this is beside the point. This works very and the title seems to fit. I can't say what I would change it to if you were to change it. This reminds me of a slippery slope that once started on never stops but only gets more steep. I love how you can analyze something so simply and yet complex and bring it into the light of day as to not turn some one away from reading it and the ideas that they perceive in it. hellbentheretic ps- you've just made my favorite authors list;) |