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| teh tarik 2006-11-10 ch 4,  | abusethe sun-shade light-dark contrast is beautiful. |
| teh tarik 2006-11-10 ch 3, | abuseit's *hay fever* this is such a sweet haiku. the second line was so serene. |
| Atheneon 2006-11-09 ch 4, | abuseAh Crystal Dragon-san anatanohaikugasubarashiidesuyo! (Your haiku is great!) |
| Failing Mentality 2006-11-09 ch 4, | abuseThis is a really good Haiku! All of them. I congratulate you. My own haikus (I've never posted them, so you won't see any of them up in my profile) can't compare! Failing Mentality. |
| Ygg 2006-11-08 ch 3, | abuseLol great last line :-) "blissful fragrants".. such rich imagery! Nice work again. |
| Ygg 2006-11-07 ch 2, | abuseThis is almost meditative. Awesome! |
| Ygg 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseVery gentle and dynamic imagery! Quite nice. |
| teh tarik 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abusebutterfly wings! so pretty, such a delicate image. |