 Limited Edition 2007-01-05 . chapter 2This is one of the best longer stories you've written hun. The plot is original because although we've all seen many catboys, this one has a nice twist. The language feels more natural than some of the other stories you've written. I don't know why "obviously annoyed" is repeated thrice. It just sounds weird. Like..."dude, we got that already". XD
"He was too old to shimmy over fences or run fast." MAHAHAHAHA I like this for several reasons. 1. Sounds realistic, reminds me of myself. 2. Uh I forgot. 3. WAHAHAHAHA poor bastard.
I don't get where the couch came from. LOL |