Excellent piece of writing. You described the emotions of the people who found her very well. I don't think you should have put the word suicide into the description though because that way, we know what's coming. It would have been better to build up the suspence and we'd get a shock at the end of the story as we realise what she'd done. Aside from that though, an excellent piece of writing as I said before ;)

I look forward to reading more of your works.

god, i really liked this...it was chilling and interesting.