Reviews for i must break yours

caralita 2007-02-23 ch 1,	abusehello, i'm cara, and this is amazing. this is so concise yet packed with emotion and i'm rendered speechless while wondering how you did it. good job.
Camilleta 2006-12-08 ch 1,	abuselove it. you never have the weak ending problemo. =P
i.am.the.winter 2006-12-06 ch 1,	abusea-m-a-z-i-n-g lol. really like this one...the whole poem kind of felt like it should be spoken; i could almost hear a voice in my head, whispering the lines... nice job. =) -- i.am.the.winter
Shiroi Kumo 2006-11-08 ch 1,	abuseWow. Just... wow. This poem is great. A definite favourite.
loves2flirt816 2006-11-08 ch 1,	abuseI really like this one but i dont really understand what one line means (call me naive or stupid if you want) I don't feel anymore/My ocean eyed cocaine I don't understand it .. otherwise, i love it
sylvia's syndrome 2006-11-06 ch 1,	abuseThere’s some really striking diction in this piece. The beginning and end were particularly strong. However, I feel that your format was a little lacking. If this poem were separated into a few stanzas with line breaks in strategic places, I think it would be a much more powerful read. As it is, the words sort of bled together, like cramped writing with smeared ink. I find myself wanting just a little more clarity…
darkink1991 2006-11-06 ch 1,	abuseI really like this one I read fix to youru writing style is differnet. captivating. The summery (I don't Know if I spelled that right it's not my strong point) drew me in I liked it.