 timayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 2009-10-30 . chapter 3Lol i read heaven bound so i decided to read this btw:P Well asmosdeus coulod have warned her before making her his wife. I like anna. |
 timayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 2009-10-26 . chapter 2Asmosdeus is intresting. The talk in the library was good:P |
 SoulessLove 2009-10-16 . chapter 20XD the fluff thing made me laugh. |
 Hiwiwy 2009-10-14 . chapter 29This story always managed to keep me from me homework... *just one more chapter!* was what I thought constantly, haha (:
And now, unto Heavenbound! And after that, Earthbound! Whenever that'll come! ^^
Luckily, Heavenbound is long and unfinished, so you have a lot of time to write it (before I'm done reading Heavenbound and come nag at you for not writing it!)
Oh, and the Hellbound oneshots. Must read those too. Are they on the LiveJournal thing?
You WILL hear from me *distant, evil cackling*
:D
Ciao |
 TiggerGurl 2009-08-22 . chapter 29FANTASTIC! AMAZING! RIDICULOUSLY WONDERFUL! :D Many words describe this story and these are just a few. I really enjoyed the Ending with "My Mate. All Mine. Cel-in." |
 RanDom 2009-07-28 . chapter 14 hey
i really like your story and how you wrote it
keep up the good work!
:D |
 ThePureAndSimpleTruth 2009-07-26 . chapter 14I'm hoping Asmodeus kills Lucious. I know, unlikely, but I'm rooting for it quite seriously. |
 lovethisstory 2009-07-18 . chapter 29 this was cute/funny/amazing/everything i love in a story.
good job! (: |
 Vii 2009-06-23 . chapter 14 @_@ I don't know if it's just me or not... but so far from what I've read. Everyone's in love with Ana? She seems kind of mary sue, but other than that, the story is pretty well written. I've enjoyed it quite a lot. |
 jasminangjiamin 2009-06-15 . chapter 29i love your story |
 Loretta Grazie 2009-05-07 . chapter 10I have been one of your silent readers for quite some time now and this is because I usually give reviews only when I have read the story to the end. So here goes my review.
I have been quite attracted to your story in its early stages for its quirk, humor and its own brand of uniqueness. And these are the most endearing qualities that I have found throughout your story.
Although it is not perfect because there are still unavoidable lapses and holes to it but still, it endures quite well. But I have noticed that there were times that you were kinda "lazy" (sorry, I do not know how to put it in another way) with some of your descriptions. I hope you will not be offended. But I believe that you should not deprive readers of the color, smell, touch, sight and taste of your story. Because it would be very unfair on the readers, right?
What else? Well, I guess that's it. Lastly, I want to thank you for sharing such a unique story with us and improve much much more. I would like to share with you something that a fellow writer friend of mine once told me. "Continue on writing and never let the pen fall."
God bless and good day to you. Oh, also, please do drop by my page and read my new story entitled "Lapse of Innocence" and tell me what you think of it. Thanks so much. |
 ranmyaku-neko 2009-04-27 . chapter 29I liked this story. My issue was that there were quite a few grammatical errors throughout. That and several points were never discussed. Like where is Lilliths family, why is she scared of small places, and what was up with the closet memory. It seemed that it would have been better to at least resolve that considering the emphasis put on it. otherwise I quite enjoyed it^^ |
 Brooke R. 2009-03-07 . chapter 29 This story definitely needs a sequel!
It's to good to end here. Haha |
 I Murder on Impulse 2009-03-02 . chapter 29Aww so cute!
xx |
 xxBloodxxRedxxRosexx 2009-01-18 . chapter 29This story needs a sequel! Please! |