Gorgeous. I love how you subtly link the concept of water/rowing to music with "ghost melodies" and, especially "this sheaf/ of oars"- if I ever created a piece such as this, I think I would die of ecstacy (but, in case you were thinking of doing so, please don't- I'd miss your poetry). Favorite, favorite, a thousand times my favorite. bella

Wow. Sheaf of ores. Rowing through ghost melodies. You rock. Truly. *high five*

I wish I could say something more ... articulate. It really does rock.

Felicia.

I love the peaceful feel of this. Your jorios are wonderful when I need something comforting.