'...she had discovered, was an excellent way to get people to leave you alone...' you should say 'her' instead of 'you' in this situation (since it isn't first person narrative)

'surrounded by forest and plants' -- go with ; thick shrubbery instead.
i like the whole 'we' thing, though. Another thing. the young guy she meets makes the story a little too predictable. it's obvious that the two will fall in love with each other, or something. u might wonna be more discreet when introducing a hero to a heroine.

d00d this a good chapter - the plot thickens!
I do admire the way that the patients work together though.

Am I glad that you updated or am I glad?!
I can't wait until the next chapter!

Great story so far! I only have one question. In the first chapter you referred to Indigo as 'anti social ten-year-old self'. But then in later chapters, when referring to everyone, you called them 'teenagers'. I'm just a bit confused about that, but otherwise, your story is amazing. I can't wait to figure out who did it!

The-Red-Bandit

Are you going to carry this on? Its wicked.

I like this.
It reminds me of certain people...
=)

Hey d00d this is cool. Keep it going.

OHOHOHH! NICe CHAPPIE emy! yayayayay you could get this published for real i bet! lemme guess...is peter Pascy?? and KAssidy is Casey? Am I Ariana? ;)

awesome my love.

I'ts alright. You really should finish it

I didn't say I doubted you, Love?

Anyways! It's very good and funny! Heh... I love it...

If anyone is reading this review... I'm Kassidy!! Well.. That's not my real name but you get the point... XD

YAY! wootwoot who am I?

keep going. it's gewd

Good!! I love you so much! It's so god!!

YOYO, you better update soon if you know what's good for you!