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| Fading Memories 2007-01-19 ch 1,  | abuseI LOVED this poem. And I definitely understood it, and could actually relate to it in some parts. I like your writing, great poetry! |
| HauntedMisery 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseWow...breathtaking...I adore pieces like this...I love the format, the description, everything about this piece is beautiful, excellent job, and thank you for your review ^_^ |
| thursdays and rain 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abuseswoOns** |
| polka dots and addictions 2006-11-16 ch 1, | abusethis is just... gorgeous. I dont know where to start saying how much i love it. The last stanza is the perfect way to end the poem, and the last '...again' is simply fantastiche. im defiantely favouriting this. Thanks for the review. ~Bex xx |
| alice is dying 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abusePerfectperfectperfect. Not only was this EXACTLY how I'm feelig, but the way this is just written so hopelessy, it can connect to anyone. Great, ** AMAZING, job, darling. I lovelovelove this. ♥ Alice |
| mistressKC 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abuseheartbreaking emotion. I love how the lines seem to grow shorter and shorter along with her desperation. |
| BrokenHeartedAngel 2006-11-06 ch 1, | abusei like this. it makes sence, is well wrote, depressingly good (i mean that in a good way. as in its depressing and good :P) |