I can't say that I hate it...because I don't.

Although the plot could have been develop just a bit more, what going on here is pretty good. I just have to say that I cannot wait to see the reunion.

Guh. This is brilliant. I'm adding it to my fantasy/supernatural slash C2 now... and my faves.

I see that this story was cut short quite some time ago which is quite depressing considering that I Am VERY interested in it now with no hope. However I shall review nonetheless seeing as it seems to make you so happy.

Let me begin to say AMAZING!! wonderful love story. I'm not quite awake yet so it took me until kiri started calling her brothers name that he was indeed the one and only Enki! Though I did notice the unlikely coincidences (< can't spell don think thats right), I thought it was gonna be thiss confusing mirrored love story thing goin on but now I realize I'm just a wee bit stupid. Neway I love it and I hope that you finished inyour spare time to submit it to that thingy of yours. And if so it would be greatly appreciated for you to post the remainder of the story.

Kay! *glomps*

... I am speechless. I can't wait for the next chapter! I want to see how Enki will react to waking up with Vincent, or if he will even believe that it is Vincent! I know he said Vincent's name, but that doesn't mean he can't go into denial, right?

Anyway... I should let you get back to writing. And I should get back to studying. *flies away*

Likey? I LOVE it! Very well-written, and very promising! I especially like Kiri and how you described her. I read this last night, so please excuse my lack of helpful detail, but the characters seem worthy of adoration, this was structured well, the flashback well done...there were a few errors a good editor would help--little things, like how you worded some sentences--would tidy up right quick!

Lovely, absolutely lovely. (*kicks self for lack of critique*)

More next time! ~TripleS~

This is quite well-written and interesting, although a bit short. It would go much better sitting at the top of the first chapter as a Prologue or Introduction.

That was way too short for a first chapter. If you're gonna write something like this, you've got to include the second chapter at the same time. Right now, you've given me nothing in which to be interested...