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| kelsi bones 2007-11-06 ch 1,  | abuseThe imagery in this so amazing and vivid! k.X |
| rust phoenix 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is just amazing. I can't even pick a favorite line. I like the idea of the poem, and the way you worded it was so powerful. |
| Crowerd Robinson 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseoh my oh my I love the first verse - people hate because they are afraid to love. It is easier for the girls to hate each other because it's their way of feeling so intense an emotion. |
| Her Wishing Well 2007-03-03 ch 1, | abuseThere is a twisted - litte girl - like quality in this. 'dies a little death' - Amazing. |
| she smolders 2007-02-06 ch 1, | abuseThe entire poem was brillant. That one expression 'the little death' has always made such an impact on me and I've always wanted to use it in a poem but know that I would not be able to use it as successfully as you. The last verse in parentheses reads bittersweet and kinda makes me think of heartache. |
| simpleplan13 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot.. its extremely powerful and I love the random capitalization.. great job |
| Kavita Najim 2006-12-23 ch 1, | abuseIs this called Volcano Girls after the strip club? |
| these travels 2006-12-14 ch 1, | abusethis was perfectly imperfect. |
| summerbee 2006-12-10 ch 1, | abuseyou blow me absolutely away. you always do. |
| KonekOniko 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseWhat are the differences? The greatest illusion is the illusion of separation... Heh, anyways, I wouldn't say this is my favorite, but it's definately up there. Teehee, great job, Kuroi-chan. Until next time~ |
| none of burt's beeswax 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abusetwisted and a little sick, but so true to life, and some relationships are just a ring-around-the-rosy like this one. |
| Soulless Liar 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abusegoddamn, I search for good poetry and I find shitloads. Sounds good and is good and I'm in love with it. Goddamn. |
| poet tree 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. There's just something so deliciously decadent about your poetry, I love it. The last verse is perfection. |
| breezy nostrils 2006-11-29 ch 1, anon. | abusepretty...it's nostaglic makes me think of childhood. nice work. |
| not sure yet 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abusei love that last part, quite delectable overall in that painfully anatagonizing way, hehehehehehehehhehehe...lovely poem |