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kelsi bones
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseThe imagery in this so amazing and vivid!

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rust phoenix
2007-08-15
ch 1,
abuseThis is just amazing. I can't even pick a favorite line. I like the idea of the poem, and the way you worded it was so powerful.
Crowerd Robinson
2007-06-14
ch 1,
abuseoh my oh my

I love the first verse - people hate because they are afraid to love. It is easier for the girls to hate each other because it's their way of feeling so intense an emotion.
Her Wishing Well
2007-03-03
ch 1,
abuseThere is a twisted - litte girl - like quality in this. 'dies a little death' - Amazing.
she smolders
2007-02-06
ch 1,
abuseThe entire poem was brillant. That one expression 'the little death' has always made such an impact on me and I've always wanted to use it in a poem but know that I would not be able to use it as successfully as you.

The last verse in parentheses reads bittersweet and kinda makes me think of heartache.
simpleplan13
2006-12-28
ch 1,
abuseI like this a lot.. its extremely powerful and I love the random capitalization.. great job
Kavita Najim
2006-12-23
ch 1,
abuseIs this called Volcano Girls after the strip club?
these travels
2006-12-14
ch 1,
abusethis was perfectly imperfect.
summerbee
2006-12-10
ch 1,
abuseyou blow me absolutely away. you always do.
KonekOniko
2006-12-05
ch 1,
abuseWhat are the differences? The greatest illusion is the illusion of separation...

Heh, anyways, I wouldn't say this is my favorite, but it's definately up there. Teehee, great job, Kuroi-chan.

Until next time~
none of burt's beeswax
2006-12-05
ch 1,
abusetwisted and a little sick, but so true to life, and some relationships are just a ring-around-the-rosy like this one.
Soulless Liar
2006-12-01
ch 1,
abusegoddamn, I search for good poetry and I find shitloads.

Sounds good and is good and I'm in love with it.

Goddamn.
poet tree
2006-12-01
ch 1,
abuseWow. There's just something so deliciously decadent about your poetry, I love it. The last verse is perfection.
breezy nostrils
2006-11-29
ch 1, anon.
abusepretty...it's nostaglic makes me think of childhood. nice work.
not sure yet
2006-11-28
ch 1,
abusei love that last part, quite delectable overall in that painfully anatagonizing way, hehehehehehehehhehehe...lovely poem
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