| Reviews for volcano girls |
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kelsi bones 11/6/07 . chapter 1The imagery in this so amazing and vivid! k.X |
rust phoenix 8/15/07 . chapter 1This is just amazing. I can't even pick a favorite line. I like the idea of the poem, and the way you worded it was so powerful. |
Robinson888008 6/14/07 . chapter 1oh my oh my I love the first verse - people hate because they are afraid to love. It is easier for the girls to hate each other because it's their way of feeling so intense an emotion. |
Her Wishing Well 3/3/07 . chapter 1There is a twisted - litte girl - like quality in this. 'dies a little death' - Amazing. |
she smolders 2/6/07 . chapter 1The entire poem was brillant. That one expression 'the little death' has always made such an impact on me and I've always wanted to use it in a poem but know that I would not be able to use it as successfully as you. The last verse in parentheses reads bittersweet and kinda makes me think of heartache. |
simpleplan13 12/28/06 . chapter 1I like this a lot.. its extremely powerful and I love the random capitalization.. great job |
Kavita Najim 12/23/06 . chapter 1Is this called Volcano Girls after the strip club? |
these travels 12/14/06 . chapter 1this was perfectly imperfect. |
mmmmmmmm 12/10/06 . chapter 1you blow me absolutely away. you always do. |
KonekOniko 12/5/06 . chapter 1What are the differences? The greatest illusion is the illusion of separation... Heh, anyways, I wouldn't say this is my favorite, but it's definately up there. Teehee, great job, Kuroi-chan. Until next time |
none of burt's beeswax 12/5/06 . chapter 1twisted and a little sick, but so true to life, and some relationships are just a ring-around-the-rosy like this one. |
bagheaded liar 12/1/06 . chapter 1goddamn, I search for good poetry and I find shitloads. Sounds good and is good and I'm in love with it. Goddamn. |
poet tree 12/1/06 . chapter 1Wow. There's just something so deliciously decadent about your poetry, I love it. The last verse is perfection. |
breezy nostrils 11/29/06 . chapter 1 pretty...it's nostaglic makes me think of childhood. nice work. |
not sure yet 11/28/06 . chapter 1i love that last part, quite delectable overall in that painfully anatagonizing way, hehehehehehehehhehehe...lovely poem |