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VoiceInsideYourHeadVIII 2009-09-16 . chapter 10
OMG this is such a good story, I love it^^ Lol my name is Virginia and I go by Ginny to! Your character Ginny and I are so alike!
miss-reads-alot 2009-01-27 . chapter 20
I'm so sad now. The story is over.:( Me Sad Now.
miss-reads-alot 2009-01-27 . chapter 10
I'm not gay or a lesbien or anything like that buy I do feel like that. I mean what's the big deal about it. It is who they are. I really like this story. My fav. character would be Aiden. Keep up the good work.
WrittenSound 2008-10-12 . chapter 14
I have to finish reading this amazing peice of pure art and beauty tomorrow. This is freaking amazing and the only reason I'm not finishing it is because its late and I cant stay on the internet... Soo... Im gonna go work on my own story now and I shall finish reading this adorable masterpeice later.
Bloodfeeder 2008-07-31 . chapter 21
Aww, man, such a good story! I'm temped to read the first one and the last one in the series just to get more of the characters, but I usually only read slash, with a few exceptions. But great job on this story and Aiden is totally my favorite character. I wish I had someone in my life like that.
Ginny definitly reminds me of Ginny Weasly in Harry Potter, but I love her personality so much!!
So I'm gonna go check out your profile, and see if you've written any other slash stories!
Great writing!!
:K
Bloodfeeder
Synthetic-Pilot 2008-03-16 . chapter 4
Alex is so sneaky. My real name is Alex too. Irony? Indeed.

-SP
Synthetic-Pilot 2008-03-16 . chapter 3
Steven is starting to really like Aiden. Kinda makes me wonder what the next few chapters will bring. Seriously.

-SP
Synthetic-Pilot 2008-03-16 . chapter 2
Aiden is a little kinky. Janitor's closet?

A classic boy/boy encounter.

-SP
Synthetic-Pilot 2008-03-16 . chapter 1
The first chapter was lovely. I'm going to keep reading.

-SP
Orangeena 2008-01-07 . chapter 21
Aww, this was really sweet. Very entertaining and time well spent. Plus- "The Beginning"... that was super cute.
xXxBathedInBloodxXx 2008-01-04 . chapter 6
wow, go Alex's documentary! and lol they made Brandon watch Brokeback Mountain. That's a really good movie...even though I had to watch it with my parents. When I get nervous I giggle uncontrollably or I sit still, thank god no one knows this though. So during the movie I was giggling hysterically. I don't know why I was doing said action but I think it was because my parents were there. They kept saying 'what the hell is wrong with you?' and I'd just say nothing.!~^^
Anonymous 2007-12-26 . chapter 1
I love this story! Absolutely wonderful.
Amber 2007-11-05 . chapter 11
awesome idea for his video i did a powerpoint very similar to that about my best friends
A.S 2007-09-01 . chapter 21
Hey, i so love ur story! Its my first tyme on fictionpress, i usually go 2 ffn N ur story is the first story i read here. I hav no regret at all! I spent 3 hrs continuously wit ur story, from chp 1 to the end. I so love it! So please keep up the gud writing. I look forward 2 reading more of ur works. I never really enjoy fics with original characters, mostly from manga, anime, HP and shows, but u really make me open my eyes 2 the possibilities. U really describe the characters very well.
Erisah Mae 2007-06-14 . chapter 21
Both this and its prequel are simply phenomenal- I love how you've tackled a controversial idea so sensitively... I didn't get the feeling that you were ramming the message down your readership's collective throats,instead merely stating the case empathetically, without particularly waving a banner around. For that, I want to thank you for such a realistic telling.
My mother is a lesbian, who only came out, (to my complete unsurprise,) relatively recently, so I really understood the issues that you depicted- no one got beaten up over here, but the fear of coming out, the fear of what people might say... all of that was right on par.
My only criticism would be how old the characters were- You've probably heard this before, but 14 year olds are very, very rarely as mature as the characters that you depicted.
All in all though, very nice work.
Erisah
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