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Synthetic-Pilot 2008-03-16 ch 4,	abuseAlex is so sneaky. My real name is Alex too. Irony? Indeed. -SP
Synthetic-Pilot 2008-03-16 ch 3,	abuseSteven is starting to really like Aiden. Kinda makes me wonder what the next few chapters will bring. Seriously. -SP
Synthetic-Pilot 2008-03-16 ch 2,	abuseAiden is a little kinky. Janitor's closet? A classic boy/boy encounter. -SP
Synthetic-Pilot 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseThe first chapter was lovely. I'm going to keep reading. -SP
Orangeena 2008-01-07 ch 21,	abuseAww, this was really sweet. Very entertaining and time well spent. Plus- "The Beginning"... that was super cute.
xXxBathedInBloodxXx 2008-01-04 ch 6,	abusewow, go Alex's documentary! and lol they made Brandon watch Brokeback Mountain. That's a really good movie...even though I had to watch it with my parents. When I get nervous I giggle uncontrollably or I sit still, thank god no one knows this though. So during the movie I was giggling hysterically. I don't know why I was doing said action but I think it was because my parents were there. They kept saying 'what the hell is wrong with you?' and I'd just say nothing.!~^^
Anonymous 2007-12-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love this story! Absolutely wonderful.
Amber 2007-11-05 ch 11, anon.	abuseawesome idea for his video i did a powerpoint very similar to that about my best friends
A.S 2007-09-01 ch 21, anon.	abuseHey, i so love ur story! Its my first tyme on fictionpress, i usually go 2 ffn N ur story is the first story i read here. I hav no regret at all! I spent 3 hrs continuously wit ur story, from chp 1 to the end. I so love it! So please keep up the gud writing. I look forward 2 reading more of ur works. I never really enjoy fics with original characters, mostly from manga, anime, HP and shows, but u really make me open my eyes 2 the possibilities. U really describe the characters very well.
Erisah Mae 2007-06-14 ch 21,	abuseBoth this and its prequel are simply phenomenal- I love how you've tackled a controversial idea so sensitively... I didn't get the feeling that you were ramming the message down your readership's collective throats,instead merely stating the case empathetically, without particularly waving a banner around. For that, I want to thank you for such a realistic telling. My mother is a lesbian, who only came out, (to my complete unsurprise,) relatively recently, so I really understood the issues that you depicted- no one got beaten up over here, but the fear of coming out, the fear of what people might say... all of that was right on par. My only criticism would be how old the characters were- You've probably heard this before, but 14 year olds are very, very rarely as mature as the characters that you depicted. All in all though, very nice work. Erisah
Platinumfrost 2007-06-13 ch 21,	abuseReally loved the story and how emotionally charged it was, I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff once i've got some sleep (stayed up to read this and am very very tired now) but yeah loved it lots x
wake of beauty 2007-04-11 ch 21,	abuseI really liked the story. That's pretty much all I can think of to say... xD
Kimberli Kitten 2007-04-01 ch 20,	abuseWow. I seriously can't stop reading your stuff. You have a real talent. You just made my favorite authors list. Congrats!
kanari kireteru doll 2007-03-17 ch 1,	abuseoh I am liking this... clicks on chapter two
Kamara 2007-03-07 ch 21, anon.	abuseHm...I don't usually review people, unless what they've written has been worth reading. I'm not great with complements, but your story was very well written. You actually had a plot, a good one that was interesting and unique, unlike most other lethargic morons, that don't bother to develope one. Also, I love how you portrayed your characters, and the issues that you addressed. -Kamara Email me, if you feel like it.

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