|Reviews for you kissed my cocaine and vodka coated lips|
| Apathy International 4/30/07 . chapter 1
i really like this. perhaps it's because it reminds me of my friends in an almost painful way. perhaps it's because those same friends aren't the people i used to love.
but, that's what a story is supposed to do, right?
it's heartfelt but not cliched.
| In the Rye 4/30/07 . chapter 1
I like it.
| poisonous 4/24/07 . chapter 7
seems like these words drip off your tongue without effort from experiences. this is amazing. so real. just the ugly real. the real that nobody likes to acknowledge but wishes to indulge in every now and then. you're one of the greatest writers i have read on here seeing as you write in a way that captures the reader and makes them feel dirty yet fulfilled through your description and simplicity.
| lackluster 4/19/07 . chapter 7
the imagery is sharp. and yet the good kind of blurry as well. i love love love that. it's my favorite part about the poem.
| Wylloa 4/19/07 . chapter 7
A raw beauty. So harsh. Entrancing.
| Her Wishing Well 4/14/07 . chapter 6
Im sure ive reviewed this before. Heartbrakingly sad.
| Wylloa 3/20/07 . chapter 6
Oh god this is so sad. So heartbreaking, breathtaking sad.
"i forgot i was supposed to save you."
There are some minute mistakes but they just add character and connect us to your fuzzy mine.
This is so Fucking Beautiful.
| Prevaricate 12/16/06 . chapter 6
tragic, in its cold adolescence.
absolutely beautifully written.
| lastchance02 12/12/06 . chapter 6
I'm sorry. The poems are beautiful. I hope things improve/have improved for you.
| dollface and her cancer 12/6/06 . chapter 5
you live and write gritty sin city sex appeal.
| x account closed x 11/25/06 . chapter 6
it's not your fault though,please try and realize that. in the end, people are only there to help and support you, you make your own choices, you choose your own destiny.
mistletoe crumbled, that was beautiful. this whole thing was so filled with self-blame and regret, it hurts.
i hope he gets out of it, but either way, it's his own doing, not yours hun.
| White Tea and Ginger 11/17/06 . chapter 5
make the world a little/blurred around the edges.
exactly what i've been trying to put into words.
| White Tea and Ginger 11/17/06 . chapter 3
i can't say anything about this one because..it's all been said.
| White Tea and Ginger 11/17/06 . chapter 1
ressurection- amazing. i wish i could write like this. excellent job, gorgeously written, and i know exactly what this feels like.
| miss.aishaj 11/17/06 . chapter 1
I love it. But I'm not gonna write a huge review until I'm done.