i really like this. perhaps it's because it reminds me of my friends in an almost painful way. perhaps it's because those same friends aren't the people i used to love.

but, that's what a story is supposed to do, right?

it's heartfelt but not cliched.

I like it.

seems like these words drip off your tongue without effort from experiences. this is amazing. so real. just the ugly real. the real that nobody likes to acknowledge but wishes to indulge in every now and then. you're one of the greatest writers i have read on here seeing as you write in a way that captures the reader and makes them feel dirty yet fulfilled through your description and simplicity.

the imagery is sharp. and yet the good kind of blurry as well. i love love love that. it's my favorite part about the poem.

A raw beauty. So harsh. Entrancing.

Im sure ive reviewed this before. Heartbrakingly sad.

Oh god this is so sad. So heartbreaking, breathtaking sad.

"i forgot i was supposed to save you."

There are some minute mistakes but they just add character and connect us to your fuzzy mine.

This is so ** Beautiful.

tragic, in its cold adolescence.




absolutely beautifully written.

I'm sorry. The poems are beautiful. I hope things improve/have improved for you.

you live and write gritty sin city sex appeal.

it's not your fault though,please try and realize that. in the end, people are only there to help and support you, you make your own choices, you choose your own destiny.

mistletoe crumbled, that was beautiful. this whole thing was so filled with self-blame and regret, it hurts.

i hope he gets out of it, but either way, it's his own doing, not yours hun.

make the world a little/blurred around the edges.

exactly what i've been trying to put into words.

i can't say anything about this one because..it's all been said.

ressurection- amazing. i wish i could write like this. excellent job, gorgeously written, and i know exactly what this feels like.

I love it. But I'm not gonna write a huge review until I'm done.
Much Love-->Suicidal_Greeting