| Reviews for Wishful Thoughts of a Stranger |
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Manuel Fajar 11/20/06 . chapter 1¿Do those dreams, that we dreamt & forgot,— Find safe refuge from all of life's troubles,— Find green lands where white unicorns gallop,— Or, Atlantis where blue mermaids swim swift? Hard to say of conjectures so vague held,— & Glimpses ethereal of fay fairies,— & Voices so soft little and brittle,— That tell us of strange glories not lived yet; Hard to say of illusions that youth had,— 'Bout what constitutes love and true friendship,— 'Bout what choices uncertain to make,— So that life could course roads slightly travelled; But now that autumn has bared all tree tops, While cold winds under gray clouds blow brown sear,— While heart longs for a tropic so distant,— Soul realizes,—Her passage, is near. |
Forever Forbidden 11/6/06 . chapter 1It's a great poem, packed with imagery and powerful words. I especially enjoyed the last lines. I could sorta relate, but I think I found SOMEONE yesterday. _ It's pretty descriptive, good job! -Helen |