I loved the last words. very powerful. I liked the messege in this too. trying to understand but getting nowhere. one should at least deserve to understand, then again, perhaps not. I also like how you compared it to a maze and the knife stabbing you in the back.

I'm wondering at the title? Also, since you've put a period at the end of your piece, you've done some punctuation. You need to put more in, commas to help the reader pause and to discern a clear rhythm.

"a world so cold and distant" there are better adjectives and it would do better if it were one more appropriate adjective or even better a more descriptive noun. i presume that the next line relates to the previous image? if so "the space"? the space of what?

"like the plague" it's a bit cliched. perhaps a different image?

perhaps look at different words for infinite? to express the nature of the space you're in (in regards to "this infinite space"), another adjective might work better eg limitless, unfathomable? using a superlative would emphasis it more within this piece.

i do very much like the ending. it all ties together in that. "so vague it's daunting" fantastic way to finish.

.:midnight:.

smut.. nice one.. has a nice ring to it :)