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| ShadowFane 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseAww! Cute! Lol. I loved this one too. Great job! SF |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseCute poem. ^^ The last line is adorable. Good luck with poetry and life. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| meg 2007-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abusevery sweet |
| harshness of life 2006-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abusehey heyz! aw...so moving manz. we all kno hu da inspiration was aye?? *lifts eyebrows* lolz neways i like its!! WRITE MORE!! bye byes |
| FireSign16 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet; I like it. |
| Jamie 2006-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseawsome poem its cool...your so talented lolz...so who is your special someone? you gotta tell me PLZ |
| kris 2006-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abusehey, nice poem bel, good work :) |
| lisagal 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseomg ur first poem posted up!! YAY! go girl! lol... well gud work! and keep at adding different techniques!! lol |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseCongratulations on your first post, and here's some feedback. It's a pretty simple, common type of poem, and though I'm not too fond of this type of poetry, I actually think it's kind of cute. I'd expand on it, perhaps add a little more to it, but even so, it's a rather ordinary poem. It's short, it's simple, and it's a very well-used concept, though most ideas are these days. |