|Reviews for Every time|
| Keree 7/1/10 . chapter 1
I somehow missed this poem when going through your poetry.
Anyhow just going on a reading basis...this isn't one of your best pieces but better than what I've with other people.
P.S. Hey! You need to come back and post some more poetry for me to review. Please.
| ShadowFane 4/25/08 . chapter 1
Aww! Cute! Lol. I loved this one too. Great job!
| Twilight Starr 11/21/07 . chapter 1
Cute poem. The last line is adorable. Good luck with poetry and life.
| meg 3/24/07 . chapter 1
| harshness of life 11/9/06 . chapter 1
hey heyz! aw...so moving manz. we all kno hu da inspiration was aye? *lifts eyebrows* lolz neways i like its! WRITE MORE! bye byes
| FireSign16 11/7/06 . chapter 1
Short and sweet; I like it.
| Jamie 11/7/06 . chapter 1
awsome poem its cool...your so talented lolz...so who is your special someone? you gotta tell me PLZ
| kris 11/7/06 . chapter 1
hey, nice poem bel, good work :)
| lisagal 11/7/06 . chapter 1
omg ur first poem posted up! YAY! go girl! lol... well gud work! and keep at adding different techniques! lol
| TaltushMeiMei 11/7/06 . chapter 1
Congratulations on your first post, and here's some feedback. It's a pretty simple, common type of poem, and though I'm not too fond of this type of poetry, I actually think it's kind of cute. I'd expand on it, perhaps add a little more to it, but even so, it's a rather ordinary poem. It's short, it's simple, and it's a very well-used concept, though most ideas are these days.