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| princess max 2007-01-04 ch 4,  | abuseThis is interesting. We're learning more and more *tangible* things about Mikaya, which makes him seem that much more terrifying. |
| CaFFy 2007-01-01 ch 4, | abuseNoo!! The animals! Not the animals! |
| CaFFy 2007-01-01 ch 3, | abuseSorry I didn't review earlier. T'is good! |
| princess max 2006-11-20 ch 3, | abuseYour chapters are too short, lol. IT keeps getting intersting nad then...stopping. |
| princess max 2006-11-15 ch 2, | abusehmm, interesting. Will the bag boy be a new love interest, or someone who can help? |
| CaFFy 2006-11-14 ch 2, | abuseI love your plot!!-love and kisses- MWAHAHAHA! But, more typos. NO!! It's okay. ^^ |
| Lucy 2006-11-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseforgive me? that's how you plan to fix it? you broke my tiny lil heart dany, i'm in pain here. let's go to the important mater (sp); no happy ending? well this might not sound too me, but i belive i'd like to read a kinda sad ending in this one. wanna read more! thanks for my kisses! love you so much |
| matias 2006-11-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseoi dani! mas historias! q bueno. pobre chico, algo re groso le debe haber pasado para q esté así. ah quiero saber q es lo q le paso! me come la curiosidad. seguila y rápido jejeje |
| Lucy 2006-11-08 ch 1, anon. | abuse1st. i have smth to say CHEATER now i can start with the regular review, thanks. I wanna know why this not so kid boy is this way! was he always like this? it doesn't give the sensation though. will you keep writing about this or you just started it and i'll have to wait like a hundred years to read a second chap? j/j (not so much though) i love you! ayer se corto la luz en mi casa... justo q queria leer tu historia, aunque no te dijera que la leia jajaja te quiero! |
| princess max 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseHmm, interesting. Kind of makes me think of the Hulk;) |
| CaFFy 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. Don't quite know what the two inside are. Er, multiply personalities? Pent up emotions? Er. I don't know. |