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| Jevanminx 2008-01-12 ch 3,  | abuseAw this is so sweet and sad almost. JM |
| Hailey 2007-07-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseI am awaiting the next chapter with uttermost impatience. This story has a really good plot start so far, and I definately hope you decide to update and continue this story. It's pretty much every high school girl's fantasy to be with their hot, young teacher. |
| Scary Stalker Girl 2007-06-15 ch 3, | abuseAs a fellow student/teacher writer, I must commend you on your story. Your depiction of Attward is lovely, he's such a multi-dimensional character! Please keep writing. Regards, SSG |
| amber-skies 2007-05-06 ch 3, | abusethis is pretty good so far, keep on writing, one thing that's great, is you haven't made the story move along too quickly; after the drama all happens, then there's not much more to write about, so good for you! update soon please, well done so far |
| JennieMR 2007-04-09 ch 2, | abusehmm... I wrote a story about a history teacher and his student, too... published 10/3/06. The Rose and the Thorn is the name of mine. |
| historyfan 2007-04-04 ch 3, | abusehi |
| KatelynnLynn 2007-01-29 ch 2, anon. | abuseAnd why have you stopped writing!? It's so good to see a story about a girl and a history teacher! (My history teacher is the hottest man alive, but he's married, go figure) I really hope you keep writing and soon! |
| Confluence 2007-01-06 ch 2, | abuseGood start so far. Just be sure to be consistent with the "Lilly" (sometimes you use 'Lily' instead)! Will be watching. :D Happy New Year! |
| HidingWontWork 2006-12-19 ch 2, | abuseHiya! ^_^ I just have to say, I LOVE this story.,., 'tis amazing ^_^ lol, I do hope you update soon, but no pressure.,., iI understand a busy schedule. c-ya! ~Hiding~ |
| Da Vinci at Work 2006-11-07 ch 2, | abuseThe transition is a bit sudden, from the two guys beating the girl to death and suddenly, they're in history class. Other than that, nice story. |
| Da Vinci at Work 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseVery suspenseful beginning. Why are the two guys beating the girl to death? |