FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| anti trends 2006-11-07 ch 1,  | abusethis is a awsome poem and i cant relate it to myself but to a certain someone i know haha... but the part "I’ve never thought I’d see a day when I would want him to want someone like me!" might be a lil too long and kills the rythum but besidse that nice. ps: check some of my work new at this kinda stuff so be honest. (review more then please, most need a lil work in my opnion) |