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James Hiwatari 2008-06-07 ch 36,	abuseOh, no! The last one! O_O'' Even though I undertand your reasons, I still think you are evil. u.ú The ending was hapy enough, though it is sort of strange to imagine Rei on his thirties (Sho is not that difficult, though, because he is like... 28/29-ish? I think I have a problem with people over 30... XDD) I'm sad it is over, but I don't regret spending my weekend (ok, I started on Thursday, so it is not weekend, but when you are on hollydays it is always Sunday anyway) reading it all, and that I'm trying to avoi having to hoover the house by sending an extra-long review before dear mum throws my laptop away to make me work. o.o' Damn, I read through all the... 61 chapters? of that, and I still can't picture Sho with red hair. They are still like Sigg and Gunni to me, which is something I should be horried about. YEah, I liked the happy ending. I'm glad the alternative ending of Unbreakable was ALTERNATIVE after all. Now I'm curious to know what the sequel would be if Sho had really died. What were the things you had written before? And on a lesser note, you should change the story status to "complete". I almost had a heart attack when I started reading and saw it was 36 chapters long and was still going on. I felt like "oh, no, I will be busy the whole weekend and I still have to wait to se the ending of it all". Glad I was wrong. Anyway, super-long review. I have work to do now. Sadly. James
James Hiwatari 2008-06-07 ch 27,	abuseHehe, me back. XD I liked this chapter a lot. From the whole thing on the beach to those last things Sho said. I am affraid that it won't last, but still... good to know things are goig somewhere... wow, only 8 chapters now... Let's see if I can finish it today. James
James Hiwatari 2008-06-06 ch 26,	abuseOh, no... here goes my whole day reading this thing... And I'm still not there!! T_T Anyway, it is three in the morning (!). Half past two, actualy, but still... Geez, this is getting a little sappy, but I still think it is interesting (otherwise I wouldn't be here instead of my bed). And I kinda like Rei. And kinda like Sho. And they still remind me of those two guys of my story, I can't get rid of them. i.i Bleh, enough babling, I'm don't need to embarass myself enough in sleep deprivation. James
James Hiwatari 2008-06-06 ch 1,	abuseDamn, I have to leave in an hour again... ¬¬'' Why can't i just sit down for a little and read the whole thing at once? ON a note that has nothing to do with nothing... I have a story I'm writing (not sure if I will post) about two guys that play in an orchestra & blablabla... the point is... My main character have nothing to do with SHo and Rei (apart from one being 16 and the other a few years olders), but I can't help but imagine them when I'm reading your story. It is creepy. I consciouly know they are not alike, but still... Anyway, hopefully I'll read all those... 35? chapters soon... glad I'm on hollydays until October! \o\ James
Not Quite Right in the Head 2008-04-06 ch 17,	abuseDang...This is the first fanfiction that has ever made me cry. Seriously, there is currently water building up in my eyes. Ever consider getting published? Oh, and update soon!
Black Suns' Zenith 2008-03-23 ch 36,	abuseBeautiful, love, fantastically wonderful. Both the sequel and Unbreakable were highly enjoyable and I loved every minute of it.
True.Randomness 2008-02-05 ch 36,	abuseIt is often said that a sequel is always lacking compared to the original. However, whoever that idiot was hasn't obviously read this story. It was fantastic, creative, intense, everything a story need. It was perfectly written, except for the common spelling and grammatical errors; the plot, the character development and the timing were all done incredibly well. Disregard less of how stupid sometime I thought the characters acted, it was always in character and made the character seemed more real. As I was reading this story I felt as if it was a couple of friends telling me their lives and it wasn't just me reading about some fictional characters. This story accomplished something most authors how to do and that is give their characters life, and this was done in this story to all of the characters, even the minor ones. Congratulations for writing such a great piece of work; I can honestly say that while I have liked many stories, Fragile is one of the few that I consider publishing material. And I will even venture to say that with a little be of polishing, Unbreakable would also be as well. Thank you for your great work, I look forward to reading more of your stories.
efphrim 2008-01-18 ch 27,	abuseCan't find High School! Where is it?
Mlle Anonyme 2007-12-28 ch 36, anon.	abuseHi I just finished reading all of Unbreakable and then Fragile and I really really enjoyed it lots!! So thank you! Of course, the stories aren't perfect but perfect is boring, after all, and you're a very talented writer all the same. :) And now I'm off to read your other writings ~~...
Callise 2007-12-19 ch 36, anon.	abuseaaww tear that's it? I am so sad its finish, BUT! YOU HAVE MADE ME SO HAPPY! with them getting MARRIED! AWW GAH! and ha ha I never though of Laz getting back the parents for Rei GO LAZ! and aw ReixSho I LOVE THEM! it's crazy to think how far they have come! from strangers, Rei saying he saved him so Sho should kiss him! To this weird relationship of hanging out and yelling at each other! to Sho almost dieing! to Sho getting rape, and Rei over coming his past, and healing, to the PERFECT CUTE COUPLE! and LOL! "It's assumed that they ** each other's brains out" HA HA! wow that um sucks the romance out of a situation ha ha!...but yeah I knew they were going for it...but the way you put it made me LOL! aaww I'm still sad there finish. OH when they were talking about where their getting married, and rain, I though of Sho walking with the shopping bags, and it raining, and looking at a fish pond...AWW! well I'm still sad their finish, wah but I'm glad they have this CUTE HAPPY ENDING! is very happy for the CUTESTNESS OF THE ENDING!
Maris. S 2007-12-04 ch 36,	abuseHey there you, it's me~ Long time no see eh? Well I had been wondering about your boys so I decided to come and check up on them =) And they are doing ver well if I do say so myself =)So much has happened since I last read this story and I believe that I stopped on chapter 29 though I had to read back from chapter 26 just to be on the safe side and to make sure that I didn't miss out on anything~ Anywhoo, I aboslutly love this story and I'm sorry to see it have to end, but I think that it was a good ending and everyone who deserved it, got their happy ending. If I was Laz though, I'm not sure if I'd be able to stay away from my big brother for 10 years. That had to be the worst torture x.x Anywhoo, you did an awesome job and I don't think that anyone could have done it any better =)
UnKnwnDrkniss 2007-12-03 ch 36,	abusewell. i still don't get the rules and everything but w/e heh. Eep it's over! They went through so much, but it ended great =D haha woow, Sho's almost 30?! Jeebus! but yeah, this is a good place to stop. if you tried to take it further, it's be eh. Great story(ies) =]
narcissistic 2007-12-03 ch 36,	abuseaw but what happened in between? i know it wasnt all fine and dandy... maybe u can make a little spin-off or something to fill in the gaps...oh or make a story on laz yup that would be cool. overall though i enjoyed the story till the very end...im so glad you finished it after so much waiting. lol
Danica 2007-09-24 ch 35, anon.	abuseOH NOES one more chapter cry it cant end so fast, broken heart well sniff sniff thanks for updating
UnKnwnDrkniss 2007-09-24 ch 35,	abuseAww Sho's a little housewife HAHA..fitting. Dammit, I want KARAOKE!...just kidding, I won't do that to you haha. You've been a good author, I won't punish you =D What's backgammon? Is it that board game with the oblong triangles? I dunno how to play that...ah well.

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