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Asha R Patel
2008-07-14
ch 72, anon.
abuseHi,

I think that's a great idea sending off this manuscript, I think you have a really good shot at getting it published. It made me think of soo many things, it also made me laugh soo much.

If you still need someone to look through and check the chapters let me know as I'd be delighted to.

I was also wondering will you continue to post the chapters here?

Sincerely,
Asha

p.s. you can contact me at
TempestSeasong
2008-07-03
ch 71,
abuseThis is, by far, my favorite story ever. Utterly spectacular. I love it and I can't wait for the next update. :]

~TS
hapax xenier
2008-06-07
ch 72,
abusei hope you're still gonna update this
cause this is great
and i really really really want to read more
dirtyahab
2008-05-22
ch 69,
abusethis is without adoubt the strongest chapter and not just because its the shortest either. you have very concise prosealtion.
PandasAreCute
2008-05-12
ch 72,
abuseOh, it's been quite a while since I've read, since in the middle you hadn't updated for a while and then I was busy.
But I must say I'm loving it.
You wan't to publish? Ah, one of my dreams too. I would love to help you out but I'm sorry to say I'm a little caught up with exams at the moment and have like zilch time.
I do have an idea for the story name though, it's a little typical.
But you could always have something like 'City of romance'
since that's how I always think of Paris in France.
Or maybe you could have a french name, like... J'adore? hehe.
Hmm, I'll let you know if I think of better ones.
DisiredLove
2008-05-07
ch 72,
abuseomg, well i love the name. it's what out my attention, it's daring. =] and well frankly, if they don't accept you as a writer, then i might just question the sanctity of them all. =]
DisiredLove
2008-05-07
ch 71,
abuseOMG! i read this whole story in like less than a few hrs, and OMG!!I LOVE IT!
BorrowedFreedom
2008-05-04
ch 72,
abuseWow. It has been a long time since I have sat down and read an entire story in an afternoon. I am seriously impressed! Keep writing and good luck with publishing!
notquitewitty
2008-04-21
ch 72,
abuseI love this story and I think it has a decent chance of getting published. Just keep in mind that it's harder to get your work published when it's been posted online for everyone to see for free. I think French Kissing & Not Telling is one of those names that is cute enough that no one minds that it's a mouthful. Good luck- I really hope you get published!
InsaneRomantic15
2008-04-15
ch 72,
abuseOMG! It would be so wicked to see you published!

=D

I'll try to think of some titles, but I still love FK&NT!
Sweet Madeline
2008-04-14
ch 72,
abuse1] You're brilliant, really. I eat up all your work.. like CHOCOLATE COVERED CHOCOLATE! :)
2] French Kissing and Not Telling is not a mouthful. I actually quite like it. It's grown on me.
3] If they don't find you worthy of being published... well, frankly.. I question their sanity!

Here's waiting for your next amazing update!
Elle Winters 9
2008-04-14
ch 71,
abuseOk here i am reviewing.. now i want my cupcake thanks.

But I must say, quick thinking by Kim, and a very accurately nice description of Sophie there.

Keep updating! =)
notquitewitty
2008-04-13
ch 71,
abuseWow. I just spent this past hour or so re-reading your story and it is just incredible. Oliver is absolutely delicious and is definitely going to be added to the list of fictional characters I've fallen for. Great chapter, and, of course, awesome story. Please update soon!
Sweet Madeline
2008-04-12
ch 71,
abuseWow, that was excellent. Love the way she told Sophie off - woohoo! You, my dear, have amazing talent. Can't wait to see how the story ends! Oh, will they ever get to kiss? haha.
S.L. Michaels
2008-04-11
ch 71,
abuseYay, updates!! And they were both amazing! =]
Can't wait to see what you've cooked up for the next chapter.
Make it soon!
x
Jenna
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