Reviews for Orange People - FictionPress.com

sicklysnowwhite 2007-01-14 ch 1,	abuseum... simple. strange, a touch confusing. did they actually eat anything but the cake? um... its kindof... dry. in the way that its not very appealing. you know what i mean, its hardly discriptive in the slightest.
Microwrite 2006-11-28 ch 1,	abuseit was okay. it needs more discriptive words. and it would be better if there was a nother weird insinant. what happened to the dad
the movp 2006-11-15 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is like the best thing ever! whoever wrote this didn a fantastic job! nice thought and creative thinking
Terrance Riverdarb 2006-11-08 ch 1,	abuseOh my word. How strange. My issue with this is that it could've been developed a bit more than this. As it is, it's better off in the children's section (no big problem if that's who your friend wrote for). But then again the word choice isn't exactly that easy. I guess what I'm trying to say is that the plot seems very simple. One more thing, it could've been much funnier.
ignominy 2006-11-07 ch 1,	abusewell, its not very detailed... and its kind of obvious... and theres not really much to it... but its ok... funny... i guess... personally, i don't really like it... i think maybe i might of liked it more if i had gotten the whole orange + vanilla = mold. what? oh well.