-is impressed-
Wow. This is extremely good. The evil side of Little Red Riding Hood. xD
I don't know why but I cracked up at the line, 'Grailwood is a dangerous place, so please try not to die.'

You're writing's good, and I can see you've got a proper plot. Yay! *claps*
Update quickly!

ah, so you changed the title, i see. for a moment, i panicked because i couldn't find 'the crimson claret' (never having bothered to read the summary for 'dust' ^_^*) any particular reason why? just curious and just as much so to see the rest of this tale unravel. and yeah... probably not a good idea to eat any kind of fruit that has gone black...

o... and i am neatly intrigued.

but- i must ask- will you ever write up that sequel to 'the last pig standing' as is promised in your profile page. hm? hm? :pokes you with a stick: hm?

Hey I like it! Totally different from what I expected. Yet another one I'll look forward to keeping up with. :) Good work.