I liked this, it captures a moment of carefree daydreaming perfectly.

I remember myself daydreaming in the summer time (lol always in the summer!) staring at nothing.

I especially liked the title, without it, I would have interpreted this differently...it ties in with the rest of the haiku, it sums it up actually...building castles in the sky.

Sweet moment!

Suzanna from the review game marathon, see link in profile.

nice and brief ;)

Excellent flow and sound. This captures something mysterious through the sound. Well done.

pretty :P

wow... its so simple and short but still paints a vivid picture in your mind. Beautiful. love it.

so simple, eloquent and pretty. i loove it.

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just nothing