|Reviews for 500 miles|
| Halcyon Impulsion 3/8/11 . chapter 1
The feel and the language here is gorgeous. My favorite part is:
There is something else beyond the chill, in the grass beneath her feet, in the glittering lights that whiz by, blurs and blurs of clotted dreams: a green disappointment, indigo defeat.
| Moondog Dozier 1/4/07 . chapter 1
I like how this is both mysteriously vague, and scene specific all at the same time. Kind of surreal in a way. The use of setting and atmosphere is excellent. Well written. Hope all is well with you, and have a happy new year. MD:77.
| Aquafied 11/9/06 . chapter 1
quite a few shiver without the cold
| ronshaberry 11/9/06 . chapter 1
Hi! Wonderful. I love the prose poem feeling, which I have been learning about today. This is just so like abstract, but it fits together. So beautiful, like all your writing. And what the heck is querencia?