Lovely piece! Very sweet. You know somehow i felt the voice that was speaking was that of a girl. The perspective and all- i don't think a guy will be that passive sounding. Heh. So i read it thinking the personna was a girl and things began to get quite weird midway. Haha, but i liked the story alot. For a moment i thought you were writting about me...

very strong emotive & descriptive words used.love it :)

I really like this. The descriptive words are so powerful. Excellent job.