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| CELESTIAL*VISIONARY 2007-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuse*sigh*...that's depressing...Constance |
| JaNde 2006-11-08 ch 1,  | abusewow... that was good. `"wavering" and "scaring" were the only bad parts in it, other than your saying "you" instead of "your". I like this. these kind of poems are what inspires me |
| penciledlives 2006-11-08 ch 1, | abuseAww...how sad. I like this...You can easily see how much you love this person, and the pain now that he's left you. Couple of grammtical errors though. Might want to edit. |