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| LanguageLove 2006-11-08 ch 1,  | abuseWow, that was pretty good. I love the second to last line, the beast of my own design. You describe trying to escape from things pretty well too. The one thing is that in the sumary you say something about emotions, even though there isn't very many in the poem. Other than that, congrats, it was great. |