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| NSheWaits 2006-12-18 ch 1, | abuseAww, I liked this story so much. It's got an interesting setting and characters, humor (which doesn't rely on cheap slapstick and things >_>), and... CUTE FERRETS YAY. The one thing I didn't like was this sentence: “You Official Magics-Humans Institute spoils everything.” it seems a bit funny to me for some reason... maybe 'spoils' should be 'spoil'? I don't know. Anyway, it was a great story, and provided I can stay up long enough I think I'm going to go find and read your other stories now ^^ |
| Casey Drake 2006-11-14 ch 1, | abuseI love Derrick. I truly do. XD CD |