Wonderfully done. At first I thought it was a bit slow. But your story was well developed along with your characters.

Love it! Simply magnificently glorious!

I do review a fair amount on this particular story, and even though it probably says anonimous, because I don't have an account, you can recognise my reviews as ' Kell-LSC '.

Keep writing, please! And I'll definatly keep reading--you can count on it ^-^

This is the kind of chapter that you want to listen to with soft, building piano solo music in the background (as I am doing).

Very, utterly romantic. Sent shivers down my arms. (the last part, I mean).

And they finally kissed!!
So, now what does this mean? And what will happen with 'Little Leda's boytoy'?

Can't wait!! ^-^

Oh! It just keeps getting better and better!! I have read few, very few, actually profesionsally published books that I have enjoyed even a fraction more than this!
Keep writing! You've got real, magnificent talent.
And the people at your job have no right to treat someone as talented as you that way.

I, specifically, especially like when you put " ... " before the start of the sentence. It's unique, and it adds flare and just the right amount of personality to what you're saying.

I'm DEFINATLY reading the sequel after I finish this!

Again, Love it to death!!

VERY interesting development!!
I wonder, and I've been thinking this for a few chapters, will Aleda end up with Ryan? It would certainly be entertaining!!

Very, VERY good! If you haven't already, you should definatly consider having it profesionally published in book-form. You can look for publishers at

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Luv it, luv it, luv it!

-^.^-

OH. MY. GOD. this is the bes stoyr ive reaed in AGES!!

you have real talent and determination.

and the action and comedy parts were so good!

xx

Greetings from Some Kind Of Wonderful Romance Awards!

I would sign out and be more professional about this, but I'm in a bit of a rush right now, so please forgive the silly penname.

My name is Kyra, and I am a judge from the above website (link sans spaced: w. skow. bythehost18. com) and I'm reviewing to let you know that this story has been nominated for the Best Non-Romance Award (Complete). Voting should start sometime this week (winners announced by the first of March), but if you don't wish to be nominated just PM me and let me know and I'll have it taken down for you. If not, then there won't be a need. :)

Besides all that, though, congratulations!

Best wishes,
Kyra, SKoW Judge

I just thought I'd let you know that this story kept me up from a bit after midnight until 9:00 am reading, with naught but a two-hour break to watch a movie on TV, and still reading during commercials. Then I finished it tonight, nearly as soon as I woke up from crashing. In short, amazing story! I loved it! The writing is superb, the characterization excellent, the sexual tension great, and the wit at times scathing (that's a good thing). I will definitely be checking out the rest of your stories, and they'd -better- be as good, or you'll be hearing from me. :-D

One thing: I do wish we'd gotten to read about Aleda's first hunt as an actual hunter. I dearly hope that will be covered in another story?

I am so sorry it took me so long to read this!
But here goes: a simply wonderful ending to a magnificent story. One of the best stories I've read period, especially since the whole idea is something new and unique; not overused.
So wonderful job!

It's really, really...well...EXTREMELY hard to imagine a "better" version than this one. I really enjoyed this story. Some of the best. And I don't say that lightly. ;)
(I would buy 2 copies of it should you ever publish it: one first edition for collection and one to read over and over and over again.)

~Bri

Your story is fantastic, I just finished reading the whole thing and I am impressed. It was more like reading a good book, than just a story! I love it!

I loved this story...

Nate falling off the stage is so great, he deserves it for being such a jerk.
So this isn't the end rt? I mean we get more... Pls?

I loved the ending, it was just so (for lack of a better word) perfect. It was a pleasure reading your work.