I don't think anyone will ever win either. Good poem.

~Twilight Starr~

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I love it. I write things like this in class, too. but mine harldy ever flow like this. the word choice adds a really cool rhythm.
i can feel it speed up and slow down
as you get more excited and more mellow.
it's a great poem, and i love the title for it. :]
-sara.

Unique. But whereas I realy love some of it, there are some small parts that I found a bit awkward to assimilate into the rest of the poem.

Nonetheless, I don't want to deaden the fact that I do really like this work, you've done a great job.

Keep writing,

Alan.

I loved this. Simply because of the words you use, and the easy flow it has, through it's complexity. It has an interesting message, though kind of deeply wound in. This is absolutely great!