|Reviews for I Hid From the World|
| Julia 11/8/06 . chapter 1
I really like this. There is a resonating depth to the last line-strikes you right at your center. I think you could make a longer poem out of this-these couple lines seem like a good ending to a poem themed around shutting the world out...try writing a beginning to it.
Overall, great work! Keep writing!
| M. S. Curoe 11/8/06 . chapter 1
Short, yes. The meaning behind it? Endless.
| The Un-great-ful 11/8/06 . chapter 1
Never try to add more to a poem just for the sake of quantity, it is a fools game.
I love this, it is straight to the point and all the more beautiful for it.