 goonlaalgoon 2008-03-02 . chapter 1Wow. I can really see the lake... |
 Kayla 2007-02-11 . chapter 1 Where did "Blood or Blood" go? I was hoping to read some more of it, but its' not there. Did you take it down? |
 Mysteryguy 2006-11-30 . chapter 1Hey! You put it up here, pretty cool. I liked it the first time...and I like it again. Glad I can be inspiring. |
 Cristine 2006-11-17 . chapter 1 Oh! ollie i love it!! great job, really, really nice. Makes me feel so calm and peaceful, and i can really imagine all the beautiful scnery you described! nice work! |
 tyler 2006-11-08 . chapter 1 great poem, makes me feel like im actually at the lake!! =) |